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by Holly on September 15, 2010 at 12:00 am
Chapter: 3-Chapter Three
  • Distreson

    Haha. Grey’s never gonna let Agrippa live that one down, is he?

  • Ilmari

    I can’t see how size has anythinging to do with getting the drop on someone. On their ability to damage with a scalpel, certainly, but as we have seen Alexis barely scratced him.

    … And so the merry misfit mob takes form. Onto new adventures!

  • Tyr

    You might want to rearrange your speech bubbles. I keep reading the wrong ones first.

    Other than that though, great comic. I like it so far, and the art is really good.

  • Keeva

    Third panel is hilarious, I love Agrippa’s expression – little bit of embarrassment, anyone?

  • The Tosh

    Pretty hard for Alexis to adapt with azatoth since she used to be a slave to Shadow Cabal.

  • Eptha

    I’m not so sure about the merry misfit mob thing, but I agree with this being the start of some new and exciting adventure 😀

  • admin

    Tyr: It’s probably panel 3 that is throwing you off as the balloon is jutting into the 1st panel, I’ll try and fix it later, but it will be a little tricky as I’d be covering a lot of that 3rd panel.

    -Holly

  • Rhetta

    Now that I’m all caught up and all I can comment; I found this comment today and I really enjoy it, your character interplay and the depth that some lack is altogether impressive and realistic. The amount of time that has clearly been put into character and plot development is obvious and impressive, thank you both for this comic, and I will certainly be a continuing reader.

  • Rhetta

    comic. I found this comic today. Typos are annoying XD

  • admin

    ^Thanks! I plan on making this a character driven story, so it’s good to know that you enjoying those aspects of the comic.

    Also, thanks to everyone for all the feedback, (I know I’ve said this before, but it’s still true :P) it really helps to keep me going!

    -Holly

  • OctoDude

    I like Grey’s little smile when he says, “We heard screaming…”
    :-]

  • Ehol

    I think that the ballon ar quite right.
    If you modify the ballon on third panel, probably it would cover a much larger parte of the panel itself and it wouldn’t be good ’cause it’s the best panel of the page :)
    I love the expressions :)
    Keep going the good job :)

  • Ehol

    Quite some typos I made in the last comment … well. I think it’s understable enough, no ? :)

  • Gillsing

    I didn’t have any trouble following the order of the speech bubbles, but even if I had, it would hardly have mattered, as the second and third panels can be read in either order and still make sense. Though I guess if you try to follow the speech bubbles in a snaking pattern, that wouldn’t work very well.

  • http://archangelm127.livejournal.com/ Archangel

    In fairness to Agrippa, I think his scream was one of surprise rather than actual pain.