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by Holly on October 13, 2010 at 12:00 am

I’m trying out a different coloring style, it’s probably not that noticeable of a change, but I feel that it is more refined. I’m basically using a digital painting method instead of line art and flats. I hope you all like it!

Jamming

I like the shading gradient and the darker cast to the background environment, it catches the eyes better as well. For example, Grey’s eyes darker in panel three versus the last panel. GJ
http://www.creatingripturned.com JoeL

Hey Holly & Drew

Great work so far! Looks like story is getting thicker and the art improving, keep it up I’m really enjoying your Graphic Novel/Webcomic.
spas

the digital painting is lovelier than even your regular work, which is saying something. does it take much longer?

and YOU CONTINUE with the star wars theme. yes, you’re my only hope was the first clue, but now it’s all i can do to keep myself from hearing these lines spoken by princess leia!
admin

Thanks, everyone.

Spas: It doesn’t seem to take much longer, I think this page took me about 6 hours. I do find that it is a more natural way to paint and I am enjoying the process more.

Also, if you like star wars you may like the new T.W.C. incentive image I have planned for Halloween.
http://aimlessdevelopment.com Ian

@spas:

…With Grey playing the part of C3P0? 😉
http://archangelm127.livejournal.com/ Archangel

Details, details, Grey. Don’t worry your boss’s girlfriend unnecessarily. ^^
Memetic

The bolding is becoming irritating. It has become a discredited trope for a reason. I have absolutely no idea why any intelligent being would ever use such awkward emphasis, but it is killing my suspension of disbelief and I try to ignore it completely when possible. You should really just use plain text unless something is VERY important (see how I did that? If I put EMPHASIS on EVERY other WORD, the SENTENCES stop being BELIEVABLE and just become ANNOYING to READ).
Drew

You are making critiques on a page that is almost a year old. We have since dealt with this problem. (at around chapter 5) This web comic has almost 200 pages and it takes a while to go back and edit the lettering.
Torg51

You know, with a little plastic surgery, a very tall human might just be able to pass for an Azatoth.