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by Holly on November 10, 2010 at 12:00 am

Chapter: 4-Chapter Four

I tried to use a brighter color palette without completely changing the tone of the comic, hopefully it helps!

http://aimlessdevelopment.com Ian

Agrippa’s last line needs a comma after “don’t worry”.

Art is excellent, as always! 😀
http://www.terra-comic.com Holly

Fixed, and thanks 😀
http://hamstap85-studios.webs.com/ hamstap85

aww, they’re such a cute couple
Jamming

The Warrior going off to war, leaving his lady fair to worry about him. I think Agrippa should worry about her more, last time he left her she got blow-ed up and a shaft of metal through her.
http://www.terra-comic.com Drew

At least Eve doesn’t have the Shadow Cabal after her though. lol
The Tosh

awwwww!
P.S- The Alien remind me of Tw’lek from star wars
kingkillion

awe so cute
Jamming

I forgot to comment about the color palette, I prefer this new one. Not that I hated the old one, but I think you can do more with shading as well as light with this new one. If that made any sense?
Torbjörn Larsson, OM

Aww, my aww has been taken! (But the “awe”, it’s so … awesome. :-D)

Colors works fine now, I think you changed the previous one and now even details show up perfectly fine; letting you know here instead. (And it’s good art, it deserves that!)
http://www.terra-comic.com Holly

I’m glad you guys liked the scene and the colors, thanks :D.
Buritsu

These two are my favorite couple!
Bardo

Great page

I really cannot see much difference, and as it makes better to people with darker monitors, keep it \o/
Keeva

Rrrrrowwll… Now this is what we all came here for; let’s not lie to ourselves, people. lol 😉

And the lighter color palette is very beautiful, and has great potential.

My good dear Holly and Drew, it may be very presumptuous of me to ask, but I’m certain I’m not the only one of the opinion that some, ah…. fan-service? would be an enormously appreciated treat for us all. You probably already have things planned, and I will respectfully apologize should you intend different content, but let me be the first to say, “we want some more o’ this!”
http://www.terra-comic.com Holly

Glad you liked it, and don’t worry this is just the beginning. 😉
Keeva

Yay! The promise of future sexually-tinted comics! lol Eeeeeeeeeeexcellennnnt.
http://archangelm127.livejournal.com/ Archangel

D’aww.
http://darwincomics.spiderforest.com Tigershark06

Here we go with the dubious promises! Agrippa don’t you know that’s the easiest way to say you’re NOT coming back!?
http://retrobladecomic.com Freya

They’re so cute together ^_^
http://www.myherocomic.com Alli Perry

Love these two!
Dylan

Looks more like a Nautolan to me. But maybe I’m just a nerd.