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by Holly on November 24, 2010 at 12:00 am
Chapter: 4-Chapter Four
  • Distreson

    Siblings. Never seem to get along.
    The colors are amazing on this page, you can really notice the palette change with the cityscape.

  • kingkillion

    dun dun duhhhhhhh i feel something ominous on the way

  • Javcs

    Oh, man … that’s just asking for trouble.

    I’ll put five on this job going to hell. I’m not entirely sure what will cause it to go to hell yet, though. But it will.

  • Jamming

    I think I agree with Javes partially because I remember a vote incentive picture.

    The other issue, I would like to see Holly’s approach to a picture on detail and distance about half the distance between second frame and the final frame. With a crowd of three or more civilians in the same detail as the main characters. I would like Holly to do it at her convince and with whatever frame is appropriate.

    You have great talent and I would like to see it, I know what I am asking is not easy as the two distances. But that is the reason is to challenge your ability sometime when you are not under pressure. Who knows, it may even be a nice change of pace.

  • Jamming

    convince = convenience
    Darn spell checker

  • Torbjörn Larsson, OM

    So, one more female into the melting pot.

    Funny how bars are the same over the universe though. Even a Pan Galactic Gargle Blaster does the same job. (Hence the “pan”, duh!)

    [And, the colors are glowing for me too!]

    @ Jamming; maybe the s.c. is challenging your abilities.

  • Torbjörn Larsson, OM

    … I need one too. That was supposed to be “… abilities!?”

  • Jamming

    @Torbjörn Larsson, OM: It is the revolt of the spell-checkers!

    Its not that I think there is anything wrong with what she has done, its that I would like to see her do more and different things when appropriate. I must of done a bad job of showing that intent.

    See, I am challenging myself as a writer.

  • http://www.terra-comic.com Holly

    @Jamming: Agreed, I am starting to make a mental note to put more effort into my backgrounds. I have to admit the end of the chapter looks to be a bit challenging with what I have planned, so hopefully it turns out well.

  • http://archangelm127.livejournal.com/ Archangel

    Rei, *nobody* survives on her own. Accept that, team up with your bro’s friends, and enjoy yourself.