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by Holly on June 24, 2011 at 12:00 am
Chapter: 5-Chapter Five
  • NOMAD

    Oh well, you can’t always be the hero . . . YOU GO GIRL

  • Woot

    The guy she knocked out switched side from his back to his stomach…

  • Jamming

    As to being all heroic, it ain’t over yet. Regarding being a hero, they are the ones that don’t come back, Be careful out there Rick.

  • Big Dave

    Yeah. Wanting to be heroic plus having a family back home. It is a dangerous life for Rick.

  • Rhys

    The problem they have with heroes (at least of the traditional fairytale variety) is that they tend to be right bastards. They waltz in burn down half the kingdom, slaughter the unsuspecting creatures and people and then Carry off the kings daughter and half the kingdom. They also tend the destroy entire empires with astonishing regularity.
    Better to not be a hero.

  • zakalwe

    I ‘d preffer my enemy with his face down than the other way around.

  • Pegasus

    Awesomesauce. But poor Rick. 😛

  • http://hamstap85-studios.webs.com/ hamstap85

    That sounds like a Washburne line (from Firefly) “Ah, too bad. I was going to be all heroic and stuff.”

  • Lazy Jesus

    merc 0 lex 2

  • AKADivya

    Don’t worry Rick, it is the thought that counts!

  • http://urbanjointz.com Cornnell

    Great work! Just found you and I had to read the whole thing through! A little too quickly paced for my taste but other than that a very enjoyable read. Plus it gives me ideas for my story telling! Can’t wait to see more. Keep it up!!