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by Holly on June 2, 2009 at 12:00 am

Chapter: 0-Prologue

Blake

Just a thought, referring to the last panel (“on Hathore last week”). What exactly would a week be when you are hoppinh from planet to planet? Earth weeks? Mars weeks? Planet X weeks? Maybe there would be some standard unit of time used when refering to different planets. Like “on Hathore two space-weeks ago”. Just a thought
Llywelyn

Just thought I’d mention that you missed the ‘n’ in ‘endanger’.
http://archangelm127.livejournal.com/ Archangel

Wow, Eve’s pretty. ^^
Janna

I love Eve’s outfit. Everything looks great, lots of details in the drawings. All of the effort is definitely showing!!!
http://darwincomics.spiderforest.com Tigershark06

I’ve seen this link a couple of times and kept telling myself to stop by and check it out. I know your archive is well into its second hundred, but I have to say for “beginning pages” these are astounding! Nicely rendered art, a story “in media res” easily identifiable conflict!

LIKE! However I must stop at this juncture and pick it up another day! I WILL be back!
Torg51

The proper term would be “standard weak), or Terrian weak(abrivatied: t-weak).
http://zimriel.blogspot.com/ Zimriel

Violent persuasion, huh?
camolot the creator

No, no, no.
See, the proper way to extract information from someone, provided you have the time, is to leave them in a small, blank concrete room with a thick steel door and a single bottle of water.
And then you leave them there for a period of three to five days.

They’ll be begging you to listen to them.