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by Holly on June 8, 2009 at 12:00 am

The Tosh

Threats to Resistance: Shadow Cabal (Mafia), United Earth Coalition.
Zippomage

Could trench coat more obvious? I’m just wondering because I can see the giant floating neon sign over his head, and I’m wondering why the others haven’t.
Blake

“The resistance has a lot of people standing against us”. Seems awkward, how about “there are a lot of people standing against the resistance”.

Hope I am not annoying you with my suggestions!
http://www.terra-comic.com Holly

Haha no, I’m working on re-lettering the comic right now anyway (you’ll notice that some of the later pages are a different size and have a different font), so it’s pretty helpful as I can easily fix things.

I was planning on proofreading it before I sent it off to be printed anyway, so I’ll just have less to fix.
Janna

Shifty beard man is awesome, hope he is a big character later in the comic!

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