Love the concept of still having control towers and traffic control operators. That’s very human. It shows advanced technology but fear of letting automated things do their things and potentially crash. Good narration that comes with it too, gratz, Miss Holly!
-Dusk
Kaotik4266
Excellent narration! I could literally hear this playing in my head like it was a movie!
Vuther
I hope they can keep that resolve.
Blake
Nice cliffhanger ending to Chapter 1! This is really good Holly.
space pirate
Okay, so that is what the ring beneath the station is for
