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by Holly on October 13, 2009 at 12:00 am
Chapter: 1-Chapter One
  • Duskbringer

    Nice!

    Love the concept of still having control towers and traffic control operators. That’s very human. It shows advanced technology but fear of letting automated things do their things and potentially crash. Good narration that comes with it too, gratz, Miss Holly!

    -Dusk

  • Kaotik4266

    Excellent narration! I could literally hear this playing in my head like it was a movie!

  • Vuther

    I hope they can keep that resolve.

  • Blake

    Nice cliffhanger ending to Chapter 1! This is really good Holly.

  • space pirate

    Okay, so that is what the ring beneath the station is for :)