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by Holly on October 27, 2021 at 12:00 am

Welcome back!

Seems like David is full of surprises, his shields may look familiar to those that remember the earlier chapters of the comic, they certainly look familiar to Grey. I tried to make this page a bit brighter since I know some of the previous pages were a tad too dark. Hopefully things are a bit more clear and readable now.

Thanks for reading!

–Holly and Drew.

balthazar

*Insert obligatory Dune reference here.*

Looks like this is about to turn into one heck of a tickle fight. I guess we’re about to find out just how good Grey really is.
http://www.nerdwatch.com CptNerd

Page looks great! Much easier to see what’s going on!
Foye

We can definitely see the improvement with the brightness. Good job!
http://www.terra-comic.com/ Holly

Thank you for the feedback on the page everyone! I went back and updated the last 6 pages and brightened them up significantly, hopefully that helps make the entire sequence easier to read.

Thanks again for the heads up on the lighting, I might not have noticed it on my super bright monitor so it’s definitely something I’ll be mindful of going forward.
Joel Joseph

If by every muscle below Agrippa’s neck paralyzed, you also mean his diaphragm (or its anatomical equivalent), wouldn’t he suffocate? What about the heart? I don’t want to even think about his sphincter muscles, either.
Mark Linimon

It definitely helps to see what is going on with the cuffs.
Ebonbolt

Sufficient disruption (& there’s always a way) will destroy or disable any technology, Dave. Tech is a tool, only as effective as the user.